2025年河南专升本优秀英语作文赏析

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Deal with Sub-health. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

　　1)现代社会很多人都处于“亚健康”状态

　　2)造成“亚健康”的原因

　　3)应该如何解决“亚健康”问题

　　【思路点拨】

　　本文属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析导致该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出亚健康问题的普遍性及其影响;分析亚健康出现的原因;说明应该如何解决亚健康问题。

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　　How to Deal with Sub-health

　　Nowadays, quite a few people are suffering from sub-health. Indeed, sub-health can result in both physical and mental diseases. Even worse, people who suffer from sub-health are more easily to die prematurely.

　　There are many factors resulting in sub-health. Among these, the pace of modern life plays a vital role. The fast pace of modern life exerts great pressure on people and pressure is the ultimate cause of sub-health. What’s more, modern people spend too much night time working or entertaining, which seriously affects their health.

　　Considering the great harm brought by sub-health, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to prevent sub-health. Firstly, people must have enough sleep to ensure that they can regain energy and physical strength. Secondly, people should have a rational diet under the instruction of doctor in order to avoid the diseases caused by malnutrition or super-nutrition. Thirdly, people should regularly do some exercise to keep healthy. To conclude, it is necessary for us to take flexible measures to avoid the threat of sub-health.

　　Directions: For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products? You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline given below:

　　1)现在许多人都喜欢买打折商品

　　2)而另一些人认为越是打折的商品越不能买

　　3)“我”的看法

　　【思路点拨】

　　本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点和提纲第2点要求提出两种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

　　根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容：指出人们对待打折商品的两种不同态度:可以买打折商品,不应该买打折商品;对比阐述两种态度各自的理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度，并说明理由。

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　　Should Customers Buy Cut-price Products?

　　When asked about whether customers should buy cut-price products, different people will offer different views. Some people like to buy cut-price products since a discount is a great appeal. However, others maintain that it’s not a wise and rational idea to buy discount products.

　　Those people who make the former choice believe they can save themselves a lot of money by buying cut-price products. In addition, they can use less money to buy more products. However, still others do not agree this. In their opinions, the discount is merely a business means of attracting customers and enhancing their desires for purchase. Besides, they argue that the discount always tempts customers to buy something unnecessary.

　　As to me, I tend to refuse to buy cut-price products. For one thing, complaints about cut-price products rank first in recent days according to the newspapers. For another, cut-price products are usually not provided with an after-sales service, such as three guarantees for products. Considering these, we may reasonably conclude that customers should think carefully when they buy cut-price products.