套用“新概念”，打造考研写作高分范文2

2010-10-27 00:00:00来源：北京新东方学校

· 学英语，要与《新概念英语》“有染”1
· 学英语，要与《新概念英语》“有染”2
· 新东方老师推荐学习新概念的方法之九

　　比如在《新概念英语》第三册第三课《无名女神》（An Unknown Goddess）中有这样一段描写：“The city at one time must have been prosperous，for it enjoyed a high level of civilization. Houses-often three storeys -high were built of stone. They had large rooms with beautifully decorated walls. The city was even equipped with a drainage system，for a great many clay pipes were found beneath the narrow streets.” 这一段总共四句话。第一句话讲这座城市曾经很繁华，享有高度的文明。第二句讲house，房子有多高，是什么造的。第三句讲room，房间多么大，装饰如何。第四句讲city 甚至还有排水系统。我们分析一下不难发现，其实第一句话就是作者要表达的中心意思：城市很繁华。后三句不过是从三个不同角度（房子、房间、排水系统）来论证作者要表达的中心意思（为什么作者可以断定这座古城曾经一度很繁华）。根据理论，国外学生论文（essay）除了开头段和结尾段之外，一般要有三段正文，从三个不同的角度去支持命题（thesis）。如果能够深刻领悟《新概念英语》的思路，掌握英语的思维模式，我们完全可以把每段的正文格式固定下来，就是主旨句（topic sentence）加上支持性细节（supporting details）。主旨句表达全段的中心思想。

　　那么我们再看看考研的作文，思路和它是一样的。 2006年“偶像崇拜”的原因，套用上面的模式就可以写成：

　　What might be responsible for this phenomenon? Among the most important reasons is economic development. Life has greatly improved since the adoption of opening and reform policies. As a result, people who have become increasingly rich can afford the time and money to show their affection for celebrities. Also playing a part is technological advancement, especially in telecommunication. Were it not for the TV and Internet, fans would hardly have the opportunities to know celebrities, let alone fawn on them. The third reason is excessive publicity in the media. To arouse audience attention and attract advertisers, the media often make sensations out of actors, musicians, and athletes, even fabricating up their love affairs.

　　大家都知道文无定法，除了这些句型和思路，我们还要保证自己在写作时不能犯过多错误，以保证拿到基本分。为此，我们必须在新概念英语的学习中掌握基本词法、句法、句型与一些常见题材的基本词汇，并且做到熟练使用一些精美句型，使文章看起来与众不同。